New Stuff
I just knocked this out, I'm not totally satisfied with it yet... Then again, I'm never totally satisfied with anything I've written. I'm a firm believer that everything can always be improved upon. Finding the right word can sometimes elude me, or maybe the right rythm.
Hopefully I will start getting a few more uplifting things written, I am a very bleak writer. I like the downtrodden and grittier side of life to write about. It feels a lot more real to me, than a world where the sink never overflows and the toilet never clogs.
I mean, when's the last time in a movie you saw a plugged toilet?
Chipping Away
How do you run
Walk maybe crawl,
Away from yourself
Then into a wall.
Bigger and stronger
You cant get around it,
Taller and thicker
You cant get under it.
It just keeps on going…
It’s the strongest thing I’ve ever seen
I just might be its only weakness.
Stronger than anything I’ve ever been
That’s because you’re my strength.
So maybe today,
I’ll keep chipping away
Trying to conquer this,
You and I know, it’s us we miss.
So maybe tomorrow wont be so lonely…
I think of you too much
The memories and such.
Heart healed from the break
Now it’s just a steady ache.
The hardest task will always be here,
Looking back in a rear view mirror.
Seeing you there, and memories of us.
I’ve got to stop thinking, making a fuss.
So I guess I’ll continue, my hardest task…


3 Comments:
Tang,
You are a very talented poet.
9:45 PM
very good, I can realate alot.
5:38 PM
Thanks guys, stay tuned, I am working on getting some more of my older works posted soon.
6:29 PM
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